Like The Moon Like Me Poem by sarah frank

Like The Moon Like Me

Rating: 5.0


Like the moon and the star
staying there in silence
A star falls is a single tear
the moon turns into shadows
Hidding from my fear
red moon brights the sky
The rage in me is releases
the moon goes away
when the sunlight comes out
pushing my worries away.
when the star gets closer to the moon
I make new friends.
When the stars fade away from the moon
I lose my friends.
when the clouds block my light
I feel useless and betrayed.
I hide from everything.
As the moon stays in the sky
I stay alive.
When the moon are in peices
My life has ended

Like the Moon
Like me
We are the same
in this suffering world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 28 October 2009

Nice conection between the human being and the nature, wonderful abstract poem, very well written.........10++++++

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Obinna Eruchie 28 October 2009

When the moon is happy, the voice is happy. Interesting.

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Amita Lama 27 October 2009

nice one Sarah... n i like the title also

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Ying Escalona 27 October 2009

really cool..i am moonstrucked Sarah..

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