I’ll ward off the darkness
Just like candle does for a room
Not a single shade of black will exist
There’ll be a gamut of stars and a full moon.
I’ll tempt you and tease you
Just like a flickering flame.
I’ll keep you waiting, whilst you melt
Slowly, then impatiently in love’s name.
I’ll set desires on fire
Just like when candle burns with a swish.
Illuminating your broken spirit,
To a spiritual love, we’ll pay our visit.
I’ll keep you anticipating
Just like a candle waits to glow.
If you’re ready, come blow me off
Wait for –
Silence
Darkness
Beating of two hearts
And then,
Me - your candle, will begin the show.
Sweetheart, Now you are talking! ! Was waiting to see one on love from you...and delighted to see a brilliant one from you.He will consume himself in you like a moth to a flame..lol! Love...TO
AHHHHH, AMOURI, Young Lady so well expressed in such fine metaphor! Splendid job, Preeti! '''''''''''''''''''FJR
hey hey preets...its getting very hot here...that candle burns as it melts into hearts...all i can say is WOW...looks like there is a man'moth' around that candle! ! ! ! ...emmm...love...nalini
very nice...very sensual...liked this one a lot happy writing arti
I really like this poem, it's wonderful! I like that it's so seductive and sensual but at the same time soft and caring. Keep it up, Preeti. -L.C.
Two moth souls recognize each other in candle light.........and I see the wax like their happy tears?
Whoa, this poem just blew me away! I really like it! One of your best I'd say ~Amber~
Preets.... Please do not do this to us men here..... LOLz.... so Preets talking love now! ! A love-ly 10 for you. Like Nalini says - This is just HOT here..... passion's melting like the wax from the burning candle! I wonder, what the poet was upto and who was in mind? Technically speaking - This is very beautifully written as mentioned by FJR. I loved the way you built the heat with your words around the theme.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very good composition seems you have a fan in me now....