Life's Circle - 56 (Senryu Series) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Life's Circle - 56 (Senryu Series)

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bottled emotions
provides viaduct between
extreme facts and dreams.

love for better life
leads to suffering and pains
hope becomes fancy

In life's travel clock
the time rotates hope and faith
from the birth to death.

Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 24 October 2015

Vicious circle, Life shows us many shades and you explained them perfectly in your haiku.

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Sanjukta Nag 22 October 2015

In life’s travel clock the time rotates hope and faith from the birth to death. Amazing, nothing more to say. this part is my favourite, though every line is quotable.

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Kelly Kurt 21 October 2015

I am glad you took to the haiku. You do the form justice. Thanks

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

Thank u, Sir, initially I thought it is not the tea of my cup to write in strict syllables and now the dust of my fear has settled.

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Loke Kok Yee 21 October 2015

You have described life cycle in just 9 beautiful short lines. so much truth and so accurate Thanks Asim-10

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Rajnish Manga 21 October 2015

Thanks for the triple dose of Haiku poems. You are unlimited in your approach towards Life's Circle involving a whole range of reality and dream, better life and pain and then birth and death within the limited scope of tiny poems. Great imagery.

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