Life Philosophy Poem by Delwen Doyle

Life Philosophy

Rating: 5.0


Silently surrendered, I slide
down the slippery slope
of dope and coke and
friends can become fiends with
fiery eyes and spies and lies
This tri-phet trip
has me loose & hip
...could be the 'E' has got me
feeling so fancy free! Man -
I just wanna... Love... everybody!
Not a bad way to be, if you
ask me.

Child soldiers, capitalist crooks,
wars & pain, written up in books!
Pedophile priests
Cult schools of thought
Psycho sick beasts
underage prosti-tots!

This corrupt society
clashes with my life philosophy!
Even if U say it's a worn cliche
I would have to disagree
'peace, love, & harmony'
Is the life I live for me
....that and a couple hits of E!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Shah 13 April 2008

A beutiful musical poem contrasting its own theme This is natural that our life philosophy can not match the system of society.So revolution is inevitable.We have to fight against the system to apply our philosophy practically.Good poem.

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Madison M. Cammue 13 April 2008

good Write! u had me thinking another positive way.

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Frank Cannon 15 April 2008

This poem reads like a fast flowing stream, full of life, sparkling, vibrant, viscous, energetic, wild, wonderful.

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Afzal Shauq 04 August 2009

This corrupt society clashes with my life philosophy! Even if U say it's a worn cliche I would have to disagree 'peace, love, & harmony' Is the life I live for me ....that and a couple hits of E! a reality based poem done with a very much poetic and impressive way..liked it..10/10

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am i write in assuming that 'E' is like, coke or something. I am not so young and hip...

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Michael Fischer 23 June 2008

Well written...very clever phrases within ('prosti-tots') . Very good philosophy to live by! -Michael

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 June 2008

Truth......... good poem

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 May 2008

Its a nice start on a philosophy. It reminds me of me. GW62

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