Life/Philosophy Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

Life/Philosophy

Rating: 5.0


If thoughts of all beings merged together....
If all bodies dissolved and our spirits flew like a feather....

Where we have surpassed the world of greed and terror
Created our own Utopia being our own soul bearers

Where you are the world and the world is you
Where community of the spirit replace the ' I do'

Where you just flew over vistas of your fancy
Drink in their spirit and move on like a bee

If we loved, lived and exchanged seamlessly....
Redefined our mission and find its key...

Where you drink love, eat joy and breathe compassion
Where Ego, I and Me are close to none

Where physical form lost its meaning...
Where only our souls and spirits would sing...

Where we have brought a new way of life
And guess what....its always spring! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 11 September 2006

I want to be in this world you so beautifully describe temporarily, but I am too much in love with the five senses to stay there. Still, I love your poem.

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Geoff Warden 11 September 2006

I like William would love to join this world, Excisite picture.......

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 September 2006

T.O.>>>A Philisophical Gem, my dear...quite an inpressive write, indeed! '''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Catastrophe King 12 September 2006

And as I read you..... I did remember that awesome poetry which made the world proud.......... Where the mind is without fear and the head is held high; Where knowledge is free; Where the world has not been broken up into fragments by narrow domestic walls; ............... Into that heaven of freedom, my Father, let my country awake.' ...... and I am sure everyone knows who wrote that! ! It was a very good attempt......10 indeed! !

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Nalini Hebbar 12 September 2006

with this poem you brought spring in! ! ! ...love...nalini

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Ruby Root 12 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, A very loving and caring poem. I really love how you write. Excellent write. Take Care.

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Steve Hagget 12 September 2006

A lovely poem - very warm and masterfull written, I really enjoyed this, Steve

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Patricia Gale 12 September 2006

Splendid thoughts for a peaceful morning read. Lovely write T.O.

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David Darbyshire 12 September 2006

Nice poem Tranquil, dave xxx

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