Life Is Sweet Poem by Poetic Sky

Life Is Sweet

Rating: 4.6


In all it's endures, you may encounter
The love, the joy and the care
Then you happens to be blessed guy
No candy, no honey nor trunk full of money
It is that little smile that says all
This life is indeed sweet and cute
Who are blessed with health and sound mind.

Friday, August 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shhhhhhhh 28 August 2020

SHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHH? ....? .....

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Chinedu Dike 11 September 2020

A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 August 2020

This life is indeed sweet and cute Who are blessed with health and sound mind.......beautiful expression about life

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 07 September 2020

nicely spoken......10 out of 10

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 09 September 2020

very beautifully spoken.......full credit

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2023

If you use more punctuation, it might help me to read as you intend it to be read. ;)

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2023

I just read your Haiku-Senryu Story and loved it. But I don't love this one. I say it needs some serious editing, but I shall not take the time now to explain. If you ask me to, I will explain. bri : )

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2021

There is nothing like "selfless love". Unless you love yourself, you don't love others.

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2021

Lovely poem. Exudes lots of positive energy. All the five stars and onto myfav

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M Asim Nehal 08 July 2021

And cute poem for cute life. Full Stars

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