Life Is A Bicycle(Lifestyle Is A Frame) Comments

thank you all for the encouraging comments, i appreciate all your lovely comments

creative idea. very good.thanks a lot

too many good poems are getting written by too many good writers. and you are one of them.beautifuly written, life is a bi cycle. just like freedy mercury of queen had written i want to ride a bi-cycle.

a steep hill comes up and you want to fly - why not, give the bicycle wings and you will get to the top. You just have to find the wings. As the character played by Willie Smith says in the movie, Chase, any woman can be swept off her feet, you just have to find the right broom.

I thought this was creative and it had a very good ending with a challenge that the framework of the bicycle was not prepared for. It is for the man in the end to do the deed. GW62

yes it is, and we are the ones who shoild control it even though sometimes we fail to, nice poem.

I love it! Brilliant... A fantastic comparison to life's journey - well done 10/10 - just correct paddle, should be peddle (I think) ... and correct last verse, second line - take other w out of water & last line - Then... lotsoluv Teacher Tia ;)