Feel stuck in between
Life and dreams
They seem to be mixed together
Leaving me unsure what is real
What if it's all one big dream?
When am I going to wake up?
A great philosophical question: " What if it's all one big dream? " I hope it is not. I cannot imagine the life energy not being real, but that is just my view. Thanks for sharing.
It's good to be awake sometimes and dream something. It enriches feelings and makes happy. But problems can arise when someone suddenly awakens you from such a dream. Great life poem.
We used to pour our dreams on the surface of reality. If reality is not a dream of yours it may be someone else's. Nice poem
Life and dreams seem to be mixed together....Yes Jennifer it is so. It's a fabulous poem....top score!
This poem recognises that reality is like a dream and a dream like reality. Many thanks for your kind words.
A fabulous poem that articulates the mixed feelings with a series of inquisitions that occur to someone who stands on the border line of life and dream! Extremely well penned...............10
Beautiful and insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Jennifer.
wonderfully expressed poem..really we are stuck in life and dreams..truth is beyond that " Life is false, a dream, So the world and our living, Beyond is divine"
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I understand this poem Jennifer. A amazing poem.