Life Poem by shun patterson

Life



You made me whole
You give me clothes
You made me strong
Yet I'm holding on, holding on
Holding on never felt so strong
To press on in life, life, life,
What is life? Vigours thunderous, moutain brought from the slumber
many questions that I sat and ponder, wonder amongst the whispering winds and deciteful streets
Leads me to wonder, Are we living life, Are is live living us
I feel like bustin up in tears, in tears, in tears,
God knows my fears, he said he will always be near
My tears seem to disapper, when I feel God near
So, I ask myself, I'm I living life, is life living me, no can you see
the real me, the inner me
under this clothes I hurt, hurt, hurt. I cry, cry, cry never tell a lie
until the day I die........to be continued.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pink Butterfly ... 12 June 2009

You have a unique way of writing! It's quite different but it's nice! Continue writing! ! ! ! Good job!

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