Lets Walk Into The Past Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Lets Walk Into The Past

Rating: 5.0


The fresh green hills are beckoning,
A sign that Spring is here,
My broken heart lies torn within,
For you're no longer here,
And as I walk this woodland path,
Your memory is so clear,
Remembering how you walked with me,
The one I loved so dear.
I come across a favourite spot,
The place where Bluebells grow,
Without you now, it's not the same,
Oh how I miss you so.
I gather up the flowers, graced with morning dew,
Picked for you so tenderly,
Beneath the sky so blue.
I'll hold your love forever,
For memories truly last,
Your always here beside me,
Lets walk into the past.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 03 December 2022

A lovely poem. Appreciated the brilliant comment of poetess Susan Lacovara. Top score and to my favourites

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Jayne Davies 19 October 2013

Thank you Susan! So glad you like it!

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Susan Lacovara 16 October 2013

Wouldn't we all love to walk into the past, at one time or another? And would we walk that same path, or choose another? Very much enjoyed your poem...and thank you for commenting on my poetry, as well. I welcome all new poet friends. PEACE

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Jayne Davies 07 October 2013

Thanks again! I appreciate your comments!

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Roseann Shawiak 04 October 2013

Beautiful memories set in poetry and sounding musical when read. Love it! !

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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