Let Me Test Am I Alive Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Let Me Test Am I Alive

Rating: 5.0


Please don't ignore.
You are looking in pains,
I see tears in your eyes,
Your face is red with strains!
Share your pains with me,
Relieve the strains with me.
No, neither I love you,
nor I want to help you,
I just want to test myself.
Share your story with me,
I know you have a tearful story,
let it cut my heart into so many pieces,
let it melt the pieces into hot white blood,
let me see whether my eyes bleed for you,
or not,
you are an stranger to me,
I don't know as to who are you,
if I cry for you, I am alive,
otherwise I am dead,
Let me test, am I alive!

Wednesday, November 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: stranger
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Musawir Raakh 19 November 2015

Yes, you are alive, until you keep on writing wonderfully,

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Kelly Kurt 19 November 2015

To empathize with another's plight is proof of life. Thanks, Akhtar

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Khalid Saifullah 18 November 2015

Really amazing poem........................................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2015

Very fantastic expression brings emotion in mind of many. Sharing this tearful story is definitely thought provoking. Amazing to have test of living mood of life. Wise sharing...10

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M Asim Nehal 18 November 2015

let it cut my heart into so many pieces, let it melt the pieces into hot white blood, let me see whether my eyes bleed for you, or not, Nicely written poem, ...Janab, Amusing 10+++

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