Laughter As Salty As Tears Poem by Denis Mair

Laughter As Salty As Tears

Rating: 5.0


Her laughter is as salty as tears
From toiling in the salt pans of this city
Not many people could be like her
Relying on salt to fill her daily bowl
So whenever she walks into someone's life
It is with a gesture of bringing new savor
Like a finely made condiment shaker.

With her companions she used to pour out wild words,
That shuttled through time, leapt epochs of history;
The soul-flights she made were worthy of pride
Because with every youthful step she took
She looked beyond sharp stones of suspicion,
And skipped over the roadblocks of ill-will,
But over time the earth-energy of such things
Did so much damage to tender feet
That her road at mid-slope
Felt like a carpet stuck with pins.

Some countrymen haven't gotten their fill
Of attaching themselves to absolute authority,
So Jesus has now become their new guarantee,
But she drank in Bible stories from age three
Like milk of human nature to feed her sympathy.
She embraced the calling of secular nun
And never failed to keep Jesus in her heart,
But watching Christian culture taken to extremes
Helped to sharpen her sense of surreal irony.

Tuesday, March 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,faith
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was written for a Chinese friend who worked at a high school in Watts.
Here is the Chinese version:

笑声像眼泪那么咸
- -给一位在洛杉矶黑人贫民窟里工作的华人朋友>

她的笑声像眼泪那么咸
因为她在一个晒盐场上班
没有几个人能够像她
那么直接地靠盐吃饭
所以她走入任何人的生活
每次都以调剂的姿态出现
一个笑面玲珑的调味罐

她曾与朋友倾心地狂谈
能穿梭岁月,跃过无数景观
无翼的飞行是作为人的荣耀
仅凭着年轻时所迈的脚步
全不顾碎石的暗伤、猜忌的路障
而受足了这种地气的嫩脚
到半坡路已感到如走针毡

有同胞没有玩够,在耶稣那里
还想来一个绝对权力的表现
而她三岁开始听圣经的故事
人性的奶水已消化到情怀里面
她狠下心,拥抱了世俗修女的使命
心中有耶稣,而推到极致的基督教文明
正为她超现实的艺术趣味提供了养分
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2018

A wonderful tribute to a friend. Such a commendable faith indeed! The hardships she encountered in life did not in any way deter her from living up to her faith with Jesus. A great piece worthy of.....10.

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Valsa George 07 July 2017

So whenever she walks into someone's life It is with a gesture of bringing new savor Like a nicely-designed condiment shaker. I can relate this story with someone I know. Such people are hard to be found these days! It is surprising to learn that she became a nun to carry Jesus in her heart in a country where religion or piety is given no importance. It is some how repulsive to see Christian culture taken to extremes these days...! I can see her reaction to this a sensible one...! A beautiful tribute!

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Denis Mair 29 January 2018

Hello Valsa. My friend belongs to a Protestant denomination, so she could not actually become a nun, but she remained single all her life. She was devoted to her job in a slum, which gave her a chance to serve people. That is why I call her a secular nun.

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