Late Evening Duet. Poem by Mizzy ........

Late Evening Duet.

Rating: 5.0


the blazing sunset
danced on the ocean like flames
and scorched the skyline.
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the moonlight fell down
and broke on the waves like glass
in golden fragments.
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Late Evening Duet.
Wednesday, August 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: evening
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 11 September 2016

GOLDEN FRAGMENTS OF MOON LIGHT are really sprinkled in each line of sea waves. Very nice poem you have composed.10

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Mizzy ........ 21 September 2016

Many thanks Pintu, ....

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2016

Like flames! ! Seeing the wonders of nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Mizzy ........ 21 September 2016

Thanks for reading Edward....

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Hazel Durham 04 September 2016

Stunningly, beautiful write, in just a few words you have vividly embraced lovingly the sunset it's breathtaking impact then the moonlight with it's competitive edge gives the grand finale. A duet of spectacular beauty, love the title and pic! Outstanding write!

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Mizzy ........ 04 September 2016

Your special reviews are much appreciated Hazel.....Thank you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2016

What an amazing imagery is drawn really. In ocean flame of sunset is dancing. Making veil in sky golden fragments of many waves are breaking in to Earth in ocean. EXCELLENT this poem is really....10

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Mizzy ........ 31 August 2016

Your kind review is much appreciated Kumarmani.

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