Last Leaf Standing Poem by Annette Aitken

Last Leaf Standing

Rating: 4.8


Last Leaf Standing

The rest had left
the tree was bare
but, there he was
just sitting there
holding on
with all his might
clinging to
the tree of life.

The sun came out
tried it's best
to curl his edges
make him sweat
still the leaf
would not flow
onto the ground
where others go.

The wind came out
to try his way
to blow
the little leaf away
he hung on tight
with all his might
this little leaf
would stand and fight.

A storm came along
knocking on his door
it howled, it growled
it even roared
the little leaf
hung on so tight
no storm will get
to me tonight.

He woke next morning
to birds song
he yawned and he stretched
he sung away
wondering what else
may come his way
The last little leaf
who dared to fight
clinging to the tree of life.

Last Leaf Standing
Thursday, May 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: determination,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 12 June 2016

Leaf Life Clinging To Life: A Season Death Refusing loved the simplicity of sweet autumn rhythms loved the fall struggle of season leaf life battles loved change of seasons flutter falling leaves loved trees retiring limb dormant bare branches in an old movie where a young woman was dying she thought she would die when the last leaf fell from the winter vine bare clinging to a brick wall but an artist painted last leaf back on after its falling in the night alone in dark storm night an artist painting painted the last lost leaf back onto a brick wall illusion onto vine from which the last leaf fell a vine death knell in cold morning despite a snow storm last leaf still clinging to the brick wall gave hope belief in life to a woman dying a moral parable with grit character death rebuking defeating Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Last Leaf Standing' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 07 June 2016

loved this from the title 'Last Leaf Standing', loved the simplicity of sweet rhythms, loved the struggle of leaf life; there was an old movie where someone was dying and thought they would die when the last leaf fell from the vine clinging to a wall, but an artist painted the leaf on in the night, this poem reads like a moral parable, with grit character refusing to be defeating by problems adversity or storm 'slings arrows of outrageous fortunes' wonderful 10+

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Annette Aitken 08 June 2016

Thank you Terry very much appreicated.

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Terry Craddock 12 June 2016

Autumn Leaves Fall In Tint Coloured Symphonies loved silk rustle simplicity of sweet autumn rhythms loved the struggle of leaf life wind rain cold battles loved still change of seasons fall flutter falling leaves Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Last Leaf Standing' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Amitabho Sengupta 08 June 2016

Could be praised for its simple diction and moral parable] Go on with your pen.

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Matt Starking 17 February 2020

The last leaf standing, lovely metaphor, it's the reflection of my life, thank you for writing, keep writing

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Sarah Shahzad 14 January 2020

It is an amazingly awesome poem. I will read it again :) awesome

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Adeeb Alfateh 07 July 2019

The wind came out to try his way to blow the little leaf away he hung on tight with all his might this little leaf would stand and fight. superb poetic expression great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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C F 01 February 2019

I can see more of you, as you describe in your bio, than the leaf that has clung on to the tree of life in this poem. Very well done, and thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 04 November 2018

Sober thoughts brilliantly articulated in a great poem. A remarkable work of art. Thanks for sharing Annette and do remain enriched.

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