Knocking In Silence Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Knocking In Silence

Rating: 5.0


Portrait of my teen days,
Reminiscences of youth,
Image of holiness in her
Youth of my longing heart,
Achievements of my soul
Nozzle of my flawless emotions,
Kite of my passionate being
Are all embedded into one, that is you.


You came into my book-
On my timeline,
Unprecedented, as a chapter,


However length you'd assume
And Whatever theme you'd portray
Vampires tales or of Divine thoughts,
Every Character has to add glory.


My petals of enlightenment have
Your colourful rays of pious love,

Shattered hopes have begun to thrive-
On your touch less knocking at the door,
Ultimate faith and unpredictable will -
Lies within you, That caters my need to live.


Till the remaining days end up
Would never forget to love and live
On and on, for you, although not with....! !

Knocking In Silence
Wednesday, April 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,soul mate,desire,longing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
PRIYANKA-YOU-HAVE-MY-SOUL-TWO
Here was a girl in white who had the capability of whitening anything black or evil. She was pious, innocent, highly sentimental yet a great learner and a real student of Metaphysics.
I always wished her a success in every walk of her life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 13 November 2017

Till the remaining days end up Would never forget to love and live On and on, for you, although not with. Beautiful poem in acrostics form. Loved it. 10+++

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hi Rani, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Dawn Novus 04 September 2017

Delight in your grateful offerings. Each one touches a kindred chord and gives to me a little more each revelation of yours.

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Hi Dawn, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Sarah Mkhonza 06 August 2016

I read your poem and thought of the past. Interestingly, it was the love of my grandmother that stood out for me. Write more poetry above love. You have a gift some of us do not have. You say a lot in a few words. Great poetry does that.

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Hi dear Sarah, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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Asia Villaflor 02 July 2016

Your a kind of poet that really a real poet by the use of words and the way you write them, by only hear tou talk anyone can say that you are not just good but an amazing poet.

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Dear Lotlot Diaz, Thank you dear for so beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delay in response.

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I agree with you dear poet. He is really an amazing poet. ସୁଭାଷ ଚନ୍ଦ୍ର ଚକ୍ର

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Sabita Sahoo 29 May 2016

You came into my book- On my timeline, Unprecedented, as a chapter, However length you'd assume And Whatever theme you'd portray Vampires tales or of Divine thoughts, Every Character has to add glory Beautiful poem to read. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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