Kiss [haiku Style] Poem by Brother Jonathan Gardner

Kiss [haiku Style]

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When God kissed the world,
Heaven's blossom fell to earth.
You were the result!


[Brother Jonathan Gardner]
Copyright © ®2008, Brother Jonathan Gardner. All rights reserved.

Notes: I'm still experimenting with poem styles. This one is in the form of an Haiku.

An Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry, consisting of 17 syllables, in three metrical phrases. That is, there are five syllables in the first line, seven syllables in the second line, and back to five syllables in the third or last line. This form of poetry typically contains a 'kigo', that is a seasonal descriptive reference. Hence the reference to a flower's blossom.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I write haikus and tankas.Hope you have time to read some of mine.Very nice haiku-spiritual-I gave you a ten.

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