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i reamembered my life when i was just a kid

saif ali

Friday, June 15, 2012

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when i was a kid the only matter
was my toys and nothing else
when i was a kid i always wants
to dream about something beautiful
and now im in a cruel world
my toys dropped in the trash and now
we all cares about our selfs
and nothing else so i wish the old days come back and the wind of our
love turn around and the tears of love
stand up and the dreams go back
in loveing memory of our happy days

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Karen Sinclair 15 June 2012

Lovely statemental piece which immediatly involves the reader... as anyone whoever reads this one solitary line will immediately whip back to their own childhood.. there is a typo in remembered but every poet rushes a thought and if its from the heart its placed before we've had time to think...bravo poet...Karen

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