Kidnapped I'm By..... Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Kidnapped I'm By.....

Rating: 4.5


Kidnapped!
I'm kidnapped!
Nobody finds me
In world's history;
In Alphabetic mystery!
On roof of sky, on basement floor of Chasm
In room of souls, onto next door of doom
On bough of mango tree with sparrow nest
On patient bed of Asclepius for swine flu test
Everywhere kidnapped!
I'm kidnapped!
Nobody finds me
For them my name
Arcane dead sea!

They steal my identity!
Oh! Nothing They are!
But stunning words of poetry!


-November 18,2018 Chattogram

Sunday, November 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From my comment on "With Identity Prove" poem by Gajanan Mishra (Member of poemhunter.com)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2018

It's a beautiful poem! The title of the poem is quite befitting! Excellent draft my friend....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2018

Wonderful inscription. How a person is kidnapped by the stunning words of poetry has been astutely and incisively delineated. A brilliant poem.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 November 2018

did u tell Kumaramaniji to let me comment on him once he loved me dearly what happened ask him kindly A PURE MISUNDERSTANDING IT appears to me

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 November 2018

Kidnapped! I'm kidnapped! Nobody finds me In world's history; In Alphabetic mystery! Pulsating expression! Extremely well penned my friend....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 June 2019

In world's history; In Alphabetic mystery! ... I liked this expression.

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 June 2019

Dear great poet, If only you drop your name from your creation. We remember poems more than the poets. Besides, it is an honour to be kidnapped. Not everyone is. Vedas and Upanishads never bear names of the author, save one or two.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 December 2018

In Alphabetic mystery! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sandra Feldman 22 November 2018

I suppose the ransom you paid Poetry, was this wonderful Poem! I really admire it for its originality, cleverness, beauty and form.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2018

A very impressive and touching poem, a nice description of human mind that is often kidnapped.

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