Keeping It In Poem by John Carter Brown

Keeping It In

Rating: 4.5


We older folks all take more time
To keep things in you know;
I try sometimes to think in rhymes
Which helps me as I go.

Long times past now I didn't need
A note-pad or reminder,
I bounced along recalling all,
And always played a blinder.

At school they use to knock us
Into shape with daily rotes,
Times-tables and the like, plus
Words of wisdom via quotes;

Of which I still remember most,
And thankful I am too,
And wonder where on earth I'd be...
At least I think I do!

Yes, older people take more time
To sort things in their head,
I often think we've learned so much
It's killed the brain stone dead.

And now when I tie laces
Upon my shoes so brown,
I wonder is there anything else
I can do while I'm bent down.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(Written Nov 2013)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ur biggest fan 06 May 2019

wow john! amazing, even tho im late many years late, its so good ok!

1 0 Reply
Lorraine Colon 08 November 2013

You never fail to entertain. I'll be laughing at those last two lines for quite a while.

0 1 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success