Keep Going Poem by Steven Pimentel

Keep Going

Rating: 4.0


I'm gonna keep writing
in till i make it..

i wanna be one of the greatest
to ever say it..

i can't wait for it
i gotta take it..

people don't understand
that is hard to get out the hood

why am i so misunderstood?
& why am i so different?

i never did nothing wrong
because i control my limits..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joe Foster 14 May 2012

This good. I like it. keep writin

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Omar Ibrahim 24 July 2009

yes keep writing cuz you are talented! ! ! ! and you have to develop your talent by reading poems of great poets....

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Louis Rams 15 July 2009

you must continue writing and putting down what you see and feel, these are thoughts and feelings that make you begin to heal. VERY GOOD WRITE. A TEN

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Ency Bearis 14 July 2009

a good determination...well expressed...keep it up.....

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