Can'T Hate Poem by Steven Pimentel

Can'T Hate

Rating: 5.0


Hate is in that shadow
that i will never go into..

if i ever say i hate you
just hand me the pistol
because is hard to hate for me
yea maybe is an issue..

lOve is in the air
like they always say

but hate is in the air too
thats something
i will never breathe thru..

because like everyone
& everything
i lOve you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 14 July 2009

a very expressive writereally nice. 'because like everyone & everything i lOve you. ' this para says it all voted10 surya

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Surya . 14 July 2009

a very expressive write really nice. 'because like everyone & everything i lOve you. ' this para says it all voted10 surya

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Ruth Walters 14 July 2009

Hate they say is akin to love, the two run so close together it is frightening! Passion, that's what it is. If you can love without ever hating then you are a beautiful spirit.....keep that way and keep writing your wonderful poems... Ruthy

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Ritty Patnaik 15 July 2009

it is a very positive quality, not hating any one! beautiful poem, well written.

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Louis Rams 15 July 2009

HATE WILL ALWAYS ROB THE SOUL, AND LEAVE YOUR LIFE, LONELY AND COLD. A VERY GOOD WRITE MY BRONXITE.

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Ivan Ezeigbo 24 December 2012

Great write. Just the same manner as mine- Rise Above Hate. You can check it out.

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Chaminda Pushpadewa 15 May 2012

hay Steven i had mean of affection its very innocent equally cruel some time the feel of come to your pen point high level

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Amelie peace 31 August 2009

well that's good to know....when you live with people feel hate all the time......you begin to forget that nice people actually exist.....nice one! 10+

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 August 2009

Yes, that's the spirit.Let us make hatred also hate itself....Let us try to love each other....10++++ for the message....

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Omar Ibrahim 24 July 2009

good idea! ! ! written wonderfully! ! ! ! 10++

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