Just Us Two Poem by No Name To give

Just Us Two

Rating: 5.0


To spot from across the room
To know that you have found him
Feeling a tingly sensation as he walks over to spit his game
To engage in formal conversation revealing nothing of legitimacy

Swaying from side to side staring deeper and deeper into his eyes
until your mesmerized
The feeling trust and desperation comes over you

You feel like you two are the only ones in the room
At that very moment you have lost all control
You can not be saved

You begin to be seduced and there is nothing you can do
Moments later you remember nothing but darkness, torment, and suffering
You hear nothing
You move nothing
You are nothing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 13 December 2009

a tale of two-some...the tale losing one to another...you portrait the feelings of love that seduces the senses vividly Gabriellie...good work...10

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Ying Escalona 05 September 2007

i love the 3rd line..and all that precedes and all that follows

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Uloia Norris Moore 05 September 2007

You are every thing in all that you do it is true.

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