Just The Moment You Smiled Back Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra
Just The Moment You Smiled Back
Spring was the name,
Given to this season
When you came!
On your arrival-
Leaves dry and detached,
Left their old assylem,
Broke their bonds familiar,
New buds softened their lips pink.
The eyes turned hazel green,
Whenever did I gaze.
The breeze started to whisper-
Your name into my ears.
The cuckoo started to sing
Sometimes rhythmic,
Sometimes melancholic,
Driving me into nostalgia.
It was a journey back home,
Into the past, Off the heart,
To the core of my world,
Revolving round yours,
From birth to births,
Lives after lives,
From worlds to worlds,
Bonds after bonds,
Meetings and partings that
Occurred between us
During each time you came.
It was a journey back home, Into the past, Off the heart, To the core of my world, Revolving round yours, From birth to births, Lives after lives Just beautiful poetry. Loved it. 10++ Rani
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Excellent poem with a touchy silver lining. Thanks for sharing the poem. It was a journey back home, Into the past, Off the heart, To the core of my world, Revolving round yours, From birth to births, Lives after lives Just beautiful poetry. Loved it. 10++ Rani
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A beautiful poem on love between two passionate lovers. It was a journey back home, Into the past, Off the heart, To the core of my world, Revolving round yours, From birth to births, Lives after lives Excellent poem with a touchy silver lining. Thanks for sharing the poem. 10++++
It was a journey back home, Into the past, Off the heart, To the core of my world, Revolving round yours, From birth to births, Lives after lives Just beautiful poetry. Loved it. 10+++
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akra Spring was the name, Given to this season When you came! On your arrival- Leaves dry and detached, Left their old assylem, Broke their bonds familiar, New buds softened their lips pink. The eyes turned hazel green, Whenever did I gaze. The breeze started to whisper- Your name into my ears. The cuckoo started to sing Sometimes rhythmic, Sometimes melancholic, Driving me into nostalgia.its a thoughtfull poem between two lovers
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6/5/2024 12:07:03 PM # 1.0.0.1119
'New buds softened their lips pink' so many good lines, always a few I love, so appropriate to a love poem