Just My Nightmare Poem by Icy rivas

Just My Nightmare

Rating: 5.0


What is happening
Nothing makes any sense
and everything around me feels so dense
He walks up to me
and it seems like i cant see
it was like he had no face
black hairs, pale skin
thats was all i could makes of the base
and then i looked down
I saw the blood all around
his back drops sithouette
it was a sight that i will never forget
the body had a gun in its hands
and then that gun landed in mine
I looked up at the faceless man
he nodded once
I pointed the gun to my head- and the BAM
I dropped dead and cold
what am i now
am i just another lost soul

Then everything change
the place wasnt the same
I was in a holtel
this whole sence didnt ring a bell
faceless was talking to a blonde girl
'who is this ' i though
i tryed to listen
but it was as quiet as an empty parking lot
I counldnt hear
nothing was clear
what am i
did i realy even die
who is this person
she didnt ring a bell
but hey either did this hotel
and who this faceless man
could he even see me
maybe he can
but before i could do anything
everything changed once agan -_-

Now i was at a party
didnt know why but i felt very sorry
then i heard the scearms
I wanted to leave
and then one by one the disappered with pan
i wish i knew there name
and then i woke up
shaking in my bed
nothing was said
looking at my walling for about and hour
and then my feeling went sour
running around my home
checking if really had died
but oh well it was just a dream
bye, bye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 25 October 2009

Nice interesting narrative poem....well done 10+++++++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 January 2009

Very intriguing writes that depicts a chilling experience.Good writes Icy.Keep it up!

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