Just Because Poem by Jameaka Shibles

Just Because

Rating: 3.0


Just because I'm not like you,
Doesn't mean you need to put me down.
Just because I don't do things your way,
Doesn't mean you need to boss me around.
Just because I'm different,
Doesn't mean you need to judge me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Knight 24 March 2010

Jameaka - it is an honour to be the first to comment on this little gem. I love the structure every other line begining with the same phrase - this gives great emphasis to your plea. because I am a Knight and a Gentleman - I would never 'Put you down' 'Boss you around' 'Judge you' because you are you and perfect just as you are. I'm not like you - I don't do things your way - I'm different from you. It is ebacuse we are different that we can be friends (through poetry) - that we have something to share - that we would have a lot to talk about (and nothing in common! ! ! !) if we ever met. I was brought up in a multiracial port (Liverpool) and i have always appreciated 'diffetrence'. I have two very beautiful daughters (I'm biased) and I told them that if they liked a Young Man I would welcome them irrespective of class - colour - creed or ethnicity because I believe that LOVE should overide all predudices. A lovely powerful poem - thanks for sharing. Love in poetry - JOHN.

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