Broke Poem by Jameaka Shibles
Broke
You broke my heart into pieces,
But you don't care.
You've moved on,
Forgot about me.
I thought you loved me,
You held me,
Loved me,
Cared about me.
When I looked into your eyes,
You gave me a look,
A look I can and will never forget.
How could I be so blind?
You broke my heart into pieces,
But you don't care.
people always seem to take my words! this is very powerful and gives the reader and insight into the emotion and betrayal that is this poem! well done!
A powerful narrative. Evoking great visual. Great choice of words. Good poem
Emotional and yet calling for sad to come...simple but so true feelings..let that feeling go...u know when ur heart shattered like a glass it still can be fixed...but it will be fixed by someone who really know how to appreciate u, why must u need to broke it again just forget it...if u let ur heart like a shattered glass so it will look shiny but not valued but u must change to be like a diamond, shiny and hard to be broken, so nobody will hurt u..but how u can transform to diamond? only u can help..Love and understand urself first and appreciate urself...u will shine as diamond...find urself because it is secret tool to win!
You broke my heart into peices, But you don't care so you must be a mare..............a good poem expressing poignant emotions.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 10:27:25 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Really sad poem of love and hurt. Good write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Dreams of a child.