Journey Towards Dawn Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Journey Towards Dawn

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Passing through cave of dusk,
Day has gone, night has gone,
Day has taken turn in nice way,
Dispersed by clouds and light,
New pink, rosy and golden sky,
So far in horizon this has told,
Holding steering drivers drive,
Break-lights glow behind to warn,
Controlling speed is wise to see,
This rare scene of natural journey,
Weather is smiling in confusion,
Beauty is motivating life's joy.

A journey towards dawn is seen,
So far we judge and witness light,
Cloudy sky gives no thunder or noise,
This road towards heart of city,
It mumbles to write and enter,
Welcoming to new day again,
Trees in calmness kiss time,
Missing nothing we are at all,
As fresh weather invites light,
Wonderful creation wings the path.

A journey towards dawn means,
A journey towards light of wisdom,
As newly arrived dawn invites,
Dawn invites day to work with sun.
We have to feel freedom and breeze,
We have to set mind and plan,
Journey towards eternity is infinite.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,15 June 2018. All rights reserved.

Journey Towards Dawn
Friday, June 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn ,imagination,journey,nature,perception
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,20 May 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 15 June 2018

A beatiful poem, there are so many phrases in this poem that stand out brilliantly, so far in horizon this has told...weather is smiling in confusion...Dawn invites day to work with sun...trees in calmness kiss time, all these things bows in humility to the eternal dawn, a great poem! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 June 2018

A beautiful poem sir! Loved reading it...10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 June 2018

A very beautiful dawn with a lovely snap of dawn we all ought to adorn At least I do great KM are you

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Muzahidul Reza 15 June 2018

Sounds spiritual that humans are concerned modern human world is keeping in deep darkness they should try and start to set out to dawn, excelently write thanks for sharing

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2018

Beautiful poem about the dawn

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Robert Murray Smith 15 June 2018

Eating up the road we move along.++10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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