Black on Black Arts

Journey - Poem by Black on Black Arts

Come with me
Let me show you wonders unseen.
Set your mind at ease.
Show me your heart.
And i will show you love without boundaries.
Come with me
I long for your touch.
Hold me close.
Our souls intertwined.
Release all your inhibitions.
Come with me
Don't be scared.
I will never let you go.
Open your eyes to the beauty that is love.
Be free to explore ecstacy.
Let me kiss you there.
I feel you shiver.
We're not done yet.
Come with me.
Mentally orgasmic.
Bodies merge.
Adrenaline based.
Dopamine induced.
Addiction imminent.
Come with me
It's almost over
Outer body inner SPIRIT.
Your afterglow shines.
Supernova blinding.
I can still see you.
Coming Down.
Don't want it to end.
Your SPIRIT embracing.
Close your eyes rest.
Our trip has come to an end.
Our journey has just begun.
Come with me

Comments about Journey by Black on Black Arts

  • Rookie Murasaki Hikari (10/23/2013 1:30:00 PM)

    cool. erotic and factual. each line connecting and breaking beautifully. i dig the writing style.: -) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 215 Points Shai Cherry (10/19/2013 5:55:00 PM)

    Wow that poem is very moving yet soothing to the soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arabella Picken (9/5/2013 4:23:00 PM)

    This is brilliant.
    Very good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Minnie Gehrig (9/5/2013 4:20:00 PM)

    this one is particularly beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (9/4/2013 5:37:00 PM)

    Wowie Zowie! Now that's the kind of journey that everyone wants desperately to experience! Makes one blush....feel so flushed! Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Serena Silenced (9/4/2013 3:03:00 PM)

    I like it ;) Sounds like it could be made for music. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/1/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful Journey on the way to heaven of Love..This journey should go on....
    Beautiful way you have put up.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Princess Lilypad (8/31/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    Beautiful expression of what a love journey can be like. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Darkangel Flyfree (8/31/2013 3:56:00 PM)

    Wow, what a journey! ! ! But don't end it there sir, keep going! ! ! ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Scarlett Outlaw (8/31/2013 1:56:00 PM)

    This poem shows the true desire wanted by anyone. It is a great write and enjoyable to read!

    Scarlett (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/31/2013 1:27:00 PM)

    what a journey, i sat down and went all the way but in end i was disappointed because it ended and i didn't wanted it to...bravo sir (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 4, 2013

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