It's When.......... Poem by Mick Law

It's When..........

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It’s when I think of you
That the light floods in and the withheld smile so long unseen comes to My face and stars my eyes

It’s when I miss you
That the scream of longing does not shout out
But cries inward and the ache of it becomes my ruin.

It’s when I see you
That the years fall off and the unspoilt innocent love of youth, the love of Boy and girl, so incorruptible,
Enwraps me, heats me and makes me live.

It’s when you leave
That your smell and taste, your lips and eyes and all that you are, lingers for a while.
Then empties from me like wine from glass
And leaves me hollow, wanting, waiting.


M Law 02/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sue Crocker 18 March 2008

This is beautiful Mick, so full of pure emotion. I love it. Sue

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Tai Chi Italy 16 February 2008

To yearn, is to learn that love will always burn in the heart of those torn apart....great loves never die, they just fly...smiling at you, Tai

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Bill Smith 03 February 2008

Liked this very much, felt much the same many times in recent years smiffy

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Bill Smith 03 February 2008

Liked this very much, felt much the same many times in recent years smiffy

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Mick Law

Mick Law

Thurnscoe South Yorkshire, UK
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