It’s Raining Poem by Minnu Serah

It’s Raining

Rating: 4.5


Casuarina tree
shed its leaves
between life & death;
I live to give you
in return.

Enclosed within Noah’s Arc
in the company of
nostalgic alphabets,
I gazed at the moon
pondering over
the abortive pains of love.

Now,
the rain
dissolves me,
to merge with it.
Like dreams,
rain loses its drives…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Rose 01 March 2008

Your poem is hearty like rain shower Maria

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Thomas Kurkoski 07 October 2008

Very forthright and quite true. Simply wonderful! Thomas

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Goldy Locks 12 March 2008

Very evoking. Depth between - existing in - your lines. keep on, sjg

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Benson Muthoka 10 March 2008

Quite insightful. I like it sarah.

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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 04 March 2008

It's heart touching.keep it up

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Vikash Kumar 01 March 2008

I feel it's raining while I read the poem. It's heart touching

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