It's Me It's You Poem by Akhtar Jawad
It's Me It's You
A son of nature welcomes the pleasant weathers' adventures,
To a pink night of November it is an invitation of a blue morning.
A fine mild cold and pleasant night waiving her soft loving hands,
A parting flying kiss, a good bye to a tall lady summer's dancing,
A short lady is showing his smiles through the pink windows,
But the outgoing one is at all not sad as she is carrying springs,
I wonder why the flowers of love spring in all the weathers,
I love to see how the girls of nature exchange their ear rings!
I am a slave of instincts for me every weather has an appeal
Nature is a lover of the show; lady winter will carry lady rains,
But I cry with the clouds as lady autumn follows the rainy girl,
What a life is life that is passed in memories of the lost stains.
It's me sweetheart, who gave you the beaches in a summer,
It's me sweetheart, who gave you the showers of the rains,
It's me sweetheart, who gave you the icicles on the glasses,
But it's you in all the weathers returning only with the stains!
Still I am happy as I hated the hate and I loved the love,
Still I am proud of the love stains; at least I have loved,
In all the maidens I saw your face, and a shining glace,
I loved none but in all the weathers I kissed your grace.
suggestions, my friend: Re lines: 3 waiving I think waving :) 5 HER 7 not at all 8 i like use of " girls of nature" 12 & 16 stains are? line 15 i think i usually misspell 'icicle' line 20 First i thought " grace" , not " glace" [ usually has 'accent mark' over e, (glace') and is pronounced differently from grace ]. I think you use metaphors; i hardly ever use and don't always recognize. bri ;)
A brilliant poem on love and life! Sweet expression sir... loved reading this beautiful poem...5 stars
A well penned poem..... Truly fabulous and superb....5 stars*****
it's e sweet heart 4 lines link pl with out love from you just for a while think where girls and spirituals would be is there any common link but one only straight men do love openly the other kind say we don't yet have kids most nice JA JI U have left me in the jungles of unknownness god forbid you forget me seeking lovelier company without me...no girls only How would you feel similarly just wink at me JA JI
Still I am happy as I hated the hate and I loved the love.......I found this line is the most impressive line of this poem which has a universal truth. It is real that we love him or her who loves us. A beautiful poem on Nature, love and life has been nicely executed.
Nature will always play an important role in love and life. Its greatness and beauty add to the wonders of existence and fuels one to be in love. A beautiful poem full of images. Well expressed and crafted.
'I wonder why the flowers of love spring in all the weathers' - so thoughtfully you have raised this question, I too sometimes ask that to myself! 'I love to see how the girls of nature exchange their ear rings! ' - A beautiful, metaphorical expression. 'I am a slave of instincts for me every weather has an appeal' - yes, me too and to me too! A nice poem, overall.
Still I am happy as I hated the hate and I loved the love, Still I am proud of the love stains; at least I have loved, In all the maidens I saw your face, and a shining glace, I loved none but in all the weathers I kissed your grace. - - A very beautiful poem of love and nature!
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5/19/2024 6:33:29 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This is really beautiful poetry sir very nicely penned. Metaphorical representation of season for love. Nice journey all through. Thank-you sir. Full score