Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 43 Points (Montenegro)

It's A Day - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

and it has the heart
of all the poems ever written
of all the words of love ever spoken
of all the colours ever spilled on earth
to paint the time

and it has the hands
of all embraces missed in the past
of all the lifelines searching for their palms
of all the warmth ever cast on earth
to deliver life

and it's got a piece of heaven in it
a sunrise in innocence purified glow
that the heart and hands will always know


Comments about It's A Day by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (6/20/2013 9:51:00 PM)

    Yes, it is as Terence said... but more, so much more... you penned words that transend the boundries of the moment... bypassing time, your words touching the edge of your inner-most beauty. Simply put... Magnetic. -Kelly. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Terence George Craddock (6/19/2013 3:34:00 PM)

    intriguing beautiful and haunting :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Terence George Craddock (6/19/2013 3:33:00 PM)

    intriguing beautiful and haunting :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Terence George Craddock (6/19/2013 3:30:00 PM)

    intriguing beautiful and haunting :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 20, 2013


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