It Is 10 Pm Poem by Halsho Zangana

It Is 10 Pm

Rating: 5.0


I sank the room in the dark,
and lit the candles one by one,
but the romance won't fill air,
till the waiting is done.

Things coming on my mind,
while I'm gazing at the door.
My heart gets trembled,
when the door opens no more.

The clock slips to 12 Am.
I fool myself and pretend.
Believing you will appear,
and the door soon will be opened.

The candles start to perish,
and the tremble fades out.
4 Am, no light, no sound,
and the tremble leaves my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 15 August 2013

If you feel in your heart that it is way past due for a person to reciprocate the love you show them, it may be time for you to move on. a romantic poem with a little twist..great sir

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Unwritten Soul 14 August 2013

Waiting but left disappointed, make feel broken and stomach despair....hmmm..hahhahaha_SOul

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Dave Walker 14 August 2013

A great poem, like it.

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