It All Gets Real...... Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

It All Gets Real......

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IT all gets real when your broken
and twisted, and you land right on
your ass,
still the news peaple say , sit tight,
helps on its way,
IT all gets real when your laughing
and drinking, and you run into the
night,
still the news peaple say, sit tight,
helps on its way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 13 October 2006

Very interesting poem David....seems like that's what it takes sometimes, I think readers will put their own meaning into this based on how they live their lives...it will either be something they can relate to or it will remind them of someone they know.

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Patricia Gale 08 October 2006

Splendid piece.... It all gets real when your broken and twisted, great line.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 October 2006

DAVID...Great Lyricals, indeed...1,4,5...hey those #'s equal out to 10! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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David Gerardino 08 October 2006

fellow poets, this is a song id written long ago, pretty much,1,4,5, , ,

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