Invisble Feelings Poem by Phil Soar

Invisble Feelings

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To watch from a distance and not be seen
As emotions run riot and shatter your dream
When the worst place is hidden, and not in plain sight
There's no chance that maybe you'll sleep well tonight

To try to establish a reason or cause
While your love seems extinguished, or captured on pause
When the trauma infects you and stirs up your grief
You wonder if there is a place for relief

Invisible feelings that haunt you each day
When the one that you love has got nothing to say
And the facts of the matter, are in front of your face
Your mind seems to drift to an unwelcome place

When all you can do is accept that it's through
There's no stopping the hurt, or the impact on you
And the rhythm of life blows your feelings astray
And your left with the fact, you have nothing to say

Invisible feelings, like a deep ocean floor
Can be like the debris washed up on the shore
No-one will know just where the feelings have been
But they've shattered your love, and flooded your dream

Tuesday, January 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julie Smith 17 January 2017

I love this poem in a sad way because it's so true for me right now. Excellent writing style!

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