Introspection-05 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Introspection-05

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writing is my habit
a lot of my writings are my creations

I'm a creator of
some self cause
thought-provoking writings

my creativity is best for me
that's why I create these all

I feel bad;
this futile I feel bad
when I find ungrateful replies,
when I find obnoxious comments
on my writings

I'm not a God
behind the universe
there is a God
God is the creator of this universe
known-unknown, seen-unseen all,
without His a little concern
nothing and nobody can move,
I believe these whole

If this futile I feel bad
while someone doing filthy comments
on my creativity,
on my creations;
then, think it deeply
how much the Creator God would feel bad!
while we everyone blaming each other,
while Muhmmadism blaming Hinduism as the meaningless religion or vice-versa,
while Christianity blaming Jewish as the meaningless religion or vice-versa,
while man defaming woman on her chastity,
while east, west, north, south dweller of this earth
blaming each other on the base of civilization,
then, think it deeply
how much the Creator God would feel bad!

He created all,
He knows best
why He created all
in various colors of skin,
in several faiths, cultures, thoughts……






-July 02,2019 Chattogram

Tuesday, July 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: introspection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 02 July 2019

Some fine insights in this poem. Go forward and create dear poet. Don't ever hold back.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2022

Are you worried about absurd comments? These are ornaments. Just ignore

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 July 2019

Self cause! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 July 2019

He knows best why He created all in various colors of skin, in several faiths, cultures, thoughts……pragmatic expression! A beautiful poem......10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 July 2019

.........................a lot of my writings are my creations WHY A LOT MUST BE ALL MB OF BD ur intelligent teach the WHOLE WORLD ALL WILL FOLLOW THEE A NEW MOHD U B

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O POET ME POET 02 July 2019

a lot of my writings are my creations WHY A LOT MUST BE ALL MB OF BD ur intelligent teach the WHOLE WORLD ALL WILL FOLLOW THEE A NEW MOHD U B

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