Instead Poem by Neo Molefe Wa Peloeahae Peloeahae

Instead



Instead of loving me
You hurt me to my soul
Instead of ushering me into your life
You showed me the way out
Instead of building me, building us
You destroyed both
Instead of being a God sent
You became a nightmare in my life
Instead of brightening the room
You made everything difficult to see
Instead of meaning the world to me
You mean nothing to me
Instead cherish what I had with you
You made a good job of erasing all that

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was my first poem
I wrote this poem for my ex
I'm glad I did because I didn't know
That I could write
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 31 May 2013

we all get past such people once in a while, its life, its how we learn to strong and how we get to be brave. well written poem.

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Ofentse Mercy Hajane 07 May 2013

Wow... I really loved your poem. Satisfying and yet sad

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