Inspirational Poem Poem by Amberlee Carter

Inspirational Poem

Rating: 5.0


i cannot go back anymore-
these stars have impregnated my eyes-
inspired divine destinations
that tangle and twist,
roads of hope inside my soul-

i feel i need to regurgitate,
the heart of humanity aches in me-
breaks in this
small skeleton of human soil,
if
only
i
could
wash the feet of the dying
in holy spit
that seeps from my chapped lips-
and fold these fragile fingers
around a prayer
to free these shackled wings

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 02 March 2008

Hope does fly on those shackled wings. Beautiful poem. Uriah Hamilton

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Emily Nunchuck 31 March 2005

I love the imagery, very well done.

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Seán O' Muiriosa 30 March 2005

Like the other guys said - the imagery in this poem is quite amazing. Unique. Well done.

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 27 March 2005

Nice the ending.Nice imagery.good one Amberlee.thank you.

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Graham Leese 26 March 2005

this poem teems and bursts with imagery, wow

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