Insomnia ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Insomnia ~

Rating: 5.0


Sailing on the ocean's waves
as the sun prepares to descend
and the moon readies to emerge
as shimmering lights replace the orange hue
the mist transforms the night's obscurity
and reminiscences glide in
through the doors with bittersweet flavour
and twinkle like celestial bodies
depriving one of slumber.

Thursday, April 13, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: insomnia
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juhaina Tumlu 13 April 2023

In the form of stored memory and then make you think about the past, quietly taking away the sleep, for some it becomes routine for others a medical cause.

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Richard Wlodarski 26 April 2023

What an incredibly beautiful tribute to insomnia. If I ever have trouble sleeping, I'll think of this poem...and dream it. What a beautiful way to fall asleep!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 April 2023

Wonderfully beautiful Asim

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Sandra Feldman 15 April 2023

The most beautiful way that insomnia was ever written, A poetic delight, I must say. Loved it, dear poet and friend

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Martinez Salotori 14 April 2023

Due to bad life style everybody is suffering from sleep disorder.

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Rajan T Renganathan 13 April 2023

Juhaina explained it nicely, For years I am going thru this journey.

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