Insatiable Poem by Sarah E.S.

Insatiable

Rating: 5.0


In the distance
i see an oasis

a paradise of efflorescence
a lilt in my heart

the spring flows
a tantalizing elixir

auspicious
a drop of eternal serenity

transformed
to vapor
in my mouth

wilting my soul

it was all a mirage

In the distance
i see an oasis

Monday, February 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 27 February 2017

You are not at all new to poetry, I can tell, this poem speaks volumes with the appearance of simplicity, the rhythm is a well crafted flow and the emotions are very controlled with focus, great job! !

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Denis Mair 27 February 2017

You are lucky your soul can give itself to those visions. Your soul reaches out, and after the vision crumbles you keep going. All the ingredients of a great journey are here.

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