Innocent Minds ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Innocent Minds ~

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Two innocent minds were interacting ~
One said to another, do you see those floating clouds,
One day I threw some pebbles in the sea,
And water started to evaporate and now see the magic
Those clouds forming different shapes with silver lining
White as snow and thick dark black and during the sunset
It becomes amber and orange,
soon they will fall by becoming rain.

The other said; look at those mountains,
they are straight out from my canvas and these sitting birds,
I made the trees for them, look here and then see there
are they not out of my drawing book?

As the darkness started to deepen both returned to their homes, now they wonder who created that sky with those stars and moon!

Monday, January 31, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 01 February 2022

What a beautiful write! In every man, there is a child. I too wonder often, " who created that sky with those stars and moon! " loved it.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 31 January 2022

Wonder of innocence cannot be ignored. A soothing poem for me.

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