Way too short. It makes me feel like this isnt much of a poem. Im not trying to be mean but you made it so short that the reader has no time to understand it. Try to make it longer and just let yourself feel something when you write it. The best poems are the ones with the strongest emotions. Write from your heart
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Way too short. It makes me feel like this isnt much of a poem. Im not trying to be mean but you made it so short that the reader has no time to understand it. Try to make it longer and just let yourself feel something when you write it. The best poems are the ones with the strongest emotions. Write from your heart