Individual Focus Poem by Doom & Gloom

Individual Focus

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I was placed on a pedestal and asked to perform
I was striped of my pride and open to scorn
My inner most feelings displayed to all
Yet I hold my head high and refuse to fall

Naked, a newfound purity

I’m blinded by light, but my focus remains
Surrounded by faces without any names
My presence encourages cheers from below
The people demand a start to the show

Expectations, belief's of the blind

Emotions run high, I shout for relief
Fear exchanged for adrenaline release
A glimmer appears in the eyes of the throng
The shout now descends to the level of song

Vanity, corner stone of expression

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ann Beard 11 July 2007

I Like this poem very much but wish the writer was not callen Doom and Gloom.

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Malini Kadir 13 April 2007

I was placed on a pedestal and asked to perform I was striped of my pride and open to scorn My inner most feelings displayed to all Yet I hold my head high and refuse to fall ...............................................................wonderful!

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Alison Smith 21 February 2007

Focal point is most profound.... Alison

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