Indifferent Poem by Lim Renae

Indifferent

Rating: 3.5


i cant show what
i desperately try
to hide

i'd rather view the world
through a veil of haze
than be me

l'd learnt my lesson
learnt it real well
through it i school my expression

not angry,
not scared,
that will be me?
-most probably

i see, hear,
but all i can say is


(silence)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amelia Butterfly 16 November 2006

i agree with you for this poem, especially the first two stanzas.sometimes you can feel so ugly and want to cover your face and when that happens you become paranoid and do things that hurt other people and in the end, nobody wants you....

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Ruby Root 05 July 2006

Excellent poem, I can relate to this poem. You feel you need to shut down. I do that to. I shut out my feelings so it hurts less. You write with great imagery and emotion. Take care.

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