Indian Boys Poem by chettur aishwarya shrivastav

Indian Boys



they fight to play,
they play to fight,
glow on their face,
speed in their veins,

little rage,
can't be put in cage,
i can feel their uproar,
shouting from ground core,

burning in their skin,
are flames of pride,
they have an invisible sun,
in their heart so bright,

can't be calmed,
they learn bets in storm,
their friends never break,
attitude in their soul never fade!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Life Goes On 07 February 2012

a good start i must say

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Wahab Abdul 07 February 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.

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