Incorrigible! A Lamentation Poem by Sandra Feldman

Incorrigible! A Lamentation

Rating: 5.0


Yes,
Some Poetry is very depressing,
The little Truth there is,
Always is, also so,
Especially when expressing
What we don't want to acknowledge
Or hear.
But would rather hide,
Knowing that our Judgement Day
May be very near,
We Still don't want the Truth
Surrounding our spheres,
Unacceptable, Cowardice!
Of friends and foes,
Why we are the way we are?
Despicable, untruthful and low
Nobody knows,
Nor why, we're even here
A disappointment
Even to ourselves,
As the closing hours
Of true civilization
Seem to savagely,
Disappear,
Coming to an end
Through Fear!

Tuesday, September 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment,fear
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beware of Mob Rule and make sure you know who provokes and organizes them.
If not stopped the results can be catastrophic
And Irreversible!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 01 September 2020

Lovely. Agreed we are a disappointment. Fellow humans

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Suresh Kumar Ek 06 September 2020

why we are the way we are is a poetic question

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 September 2020

2) Citing your precious line here: ......... true civilization Only for the happy few, dear great poetess, that's you My love for poetry has no ending that's why I love all your poems created by your amazing mind And you may know about this: God knows too your mind in all ways My response is based upon such a gorgeous statement in this impressing poem. A 10+++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 September 2020

WOW! This is true poetry ti my heart. Dear great poetess, you can or we can write as much as we wish and we have excellent intentions but the wrong eyes shall always read wrong meanings with other words they are not blind, only they must be taught to read, dear poetess.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 September 2020

A well conveyed message. Truly excellent........10++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2020

A powerful and incisive write. Distortion of truth, division and hate are the works of evil. We must always be vigilant and discerning to know these people who want to rule the world through darkness. A wonderful poem full of emotions. Very passionate.

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