Incarcerated Poem by Lil Loc

Incarcerated

Rating: 4.5


'A beacon of light a glimmer of hope Suffocated at it's infancy Lost inside a vessel of pain on a one way train Derailed out of control, If you have never bared witness You will never know, Blind to the facts Effects of pain often seep threw the concrete But screams muffled by years of Incarceration Left me Institutionalized and soul weakened, Just Part of the scenery now, HOPELESS, Eyes deaden heart blackened I will never get out'...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
IDK what to say...Couldn't stop thinking about my dad he has been locked away for 23 years now...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 30 September 2012

Outburst of the heart and mind! An ocean of meaningful and rich imagery filtered in this thought provoking write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Speak your mind! Speak your heart! Listen with empty ear to those disturbing words coming from those that have nothing to show or prove! Keep it up and WELCOME to the Poetry World! Where you are right now, I was some time ago and where I am right now, you shall be one day! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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Lil Loc 30 September 2012

Do you write or just randomly comment? , I respect your opinion, but don't try to analyze my true feelings from the words you read thx

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Floyd Burger 30 September 2012

IDK what to say either...except it may be more common that you think...the situation i mean

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