In Your Fist Poem by Reshma Ramesh

In Your Fist

Rating: 5.0


Hold me
In your
Fist
Like
The wind
I will
Only
Then
Remain
Yours
Forever!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 12 December 2008

Beautifully, Reshma... 10.... Tsira

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Janice Windle 15 December 2008

You certainly know how to issue a challenge, Reshma! Strong and concise!

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Alison Cassidy 26 December 2008

It is the simplicity of this one that makes such an impact. And 'fist' is such a great word too. Lovely write. Warmly, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 December 2008

Like perfumes Of jasmine and roses In the breeze of the evening In the desert at sunset Like a flying horse Towards heaven In defiance of time And space multiplied With nothingness I shall hold you In the power of my arm The nothingness I breathe To be eternal myself

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Richard Post 23 December 2008

Forever oh moonbeam caught

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2008

gone with the wind...out of the fist! a golden uncatchable fish? ...nice and short...a fistful...10

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Mittur Ramprasad 15 December 2008

well done well done did you read my poem Rose written in Haiku and Holidai season let me konw what you think of my Haikus

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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