In You I Find.. Poem by Ash win

In You I Find..

Rating: 4.7


I see the unshed tears
I see the unshared pain
I hear your unspoken words
I see your unheld hand..

Let me hug you
Let me hold you
Let me share your pain
Let me just listen to you

I promise not to judge
I promise not to hurt
Let me just hold your hand
Let me just cry with you

I maynot solve your problem
I maynot give you a solution
But I will lessen your pain
by just being with you..

Am just the desire to break your pain
Am just the shoulder for you to lean
Am the hope in you
Am the happiness you heed
Am the smile in your heart
Am not someone
Am just your friend
I am you
You are me....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caterpillar MC 16 October 2008

Good One, Nandhini. A very pleasant read.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 October 2008

Wonderful, I enjoyed reading this poem.

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Brandi Guthrie 16 April 2011

Pure acceptance without walls, without pretenses. Lovely.

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Gopi Mannur 14 December 2008

Great! what else i can say, these are not just words or sentence, inspite they are pearls in a same thread, exellant work, keep it up, i'm waiting more of this kind to read and feel.

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Squizzle Jellyfish 10 November 2008

Absolutely beautiful. I loved and could relate to every word. Great job.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 October 2008

a two in one situation...symbol of understanding and compromise...in love...in life...well written 10

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premji premji 17 October 2008

beautiful lines *10*

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