In The Park In Winter. Poem by Margery Rehman

Margery Rehman

Margery Rehman

Glasgow, Scotland but living in Karachi, Pakistan.

In The Park In Winter.

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Snow hard underfoot
Bare trees frost lined gleam in rows
Stars in a cold sky
Lovers clinging close for warmth
Soon come aflame with passion.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 30 September 2007

You have captured the warmth of passion in the frost of your words. Succinctly penned - less is more. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 17 September 2007

Brief, but very beautiful. I like what you have seen from your window on the world. Warm regards, Sandra

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R H 27 August 2007

You have captured much in this stark word painting - thoughtfully composed with a great contrast in the final line. Justine

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Margery Rehman

Margery Rehman

Glasgow, Scotland but living in Karachi, Pakistan.
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